It is my desire to re-re-write the Rin/Girey story with a coherent Outline.
So far I have:
Beginning: Rin takes Girey from the Camp
(Middle: long road to Lannamer. Things happen)
End: Something happens in the castle.
For those of you that are Rin/Girey readers, what are key points and what is it missing? What could be left out?
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