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Stranger Things, a continuation of a fanfic of Narnia and Valdemar

first: A Door in the Wall
Second: On the Other Side of the Door
Third: The Call Comes Again
Fourth: New Travelling Companions
Fifth: Complications and then Complications

Leffen had a steady, comfortable gait, the sort Susan imagined must be lovely on campaign, when one spent so much time in-saddle that one’s saddle sores had gained their own landscapes and maps. She found it quite soothing, and an interesting contrast to Soleck’s story.

“The Prince, Sendar, he has been having trouble around the Palace. Nothing large, but these things sometimes happen to young nobles. They get involved with people who are not the best choices, they allow themselves to be taunted into things they shouldn’t…”

“Like the time, remember…” Lucy began, and stopped. “That is, young people do that everywhere.”

Soleck wisely did not smile at this coming in Lucy’s small, chirping voice. “Indeed. Our Prince has made some choices that, perhaps, he would not have made were here somewhat older. And he is not listening to older or wiser counsel, or, that is, was not listening before he disappeared.”

“Kidnapped?” asked Peter.

Soleck coughed. “No. That is, we do not believe he was kidnapped without his own willing consent, although how willing he might be now is up to some interpretation. The problem we are having is, he has stopped listening to Heralds or to Companions save his own, and his own Companion, who should know better, is not speaking with us. He…” Here Soleck coughed again, and took a moment to look quite embarrassed. “He will not speak with anyone he considers an adult or an authority.”

“So we’re perfect,” Edmund pointed out cheerfully, “because we don’t look like adults or authority figures at all.”

Susan eyed him thoughtfully, but Ed didn’t seem upset by this revelation. It had been an adjustment for all of them, getting used to their childish bodies yet again, but it had seemed hardest on him and Lu. Now, though, Edmund was grinning. “It’s practically being incognito. I remember things I thought I’d lost forever, I can still just about swing this mace properly, and everyone is going to look at me and see a kid.”

“When did you get interested in espionage, Ed?” Peter teased. “I thought you were more direct than that.”

Susan remembered it differently. She remembered Ed smiling brightly and coming home with his pockets full of secrets. “I think it’s brilliant. That is, once we’ve gotten clothes that don’t look so much like we crawled through the rag-bag and not the closet to get here.”

“You do not look rag-bag,” Soleck protested gallantly. “You look foreign and strange, that is all. Exotic.”
“Exotic!” Lucy exclaimed. “I like that. Like the time when we went to Madrid, and we were the strangest thing around. We’re exotic, Susan!”

Susan thought, from the way that Soleck looked at her, that he thought exotic was a very good thing indeed. She ducked her head and smiled, pretending it was just at her sister. “Well, we’re in a strange land again, Lu. It’s been a while since we could say that.”

“You are not so different in coloration than many of those here in Valdemar,” Soleck offered. “But your manner is, perhaps, a little different. As is mine.”

“Yours?” Peter tilted his head. “Are you strange, then, to those who know you?”

::Not to those who know him,:: Leffen inserted, ::but to those who will not see.::

Susan took a long look at Soleck. Her first impression had been of a Calormen who had been in the sun for quite some time. His white clothing hung on him as if tailored to him, and matched the Leffen and Leffen’s tack too much for it to be an accident. He was handsome, she thought, with a square chin and a pleasant smile, but that could be its own curse.

He shifted from foot to foot. “I am dark and strange for one of Valdemar, yes. There are darker, of course, but none of them look so… so Karsite as I do.”

“Karsite?” Peter asked.

Soleck shifted again. “It does happen. Not often, but the Companions Choose who they will.”

“It’s not that.” Edmund was carefully neutral. “What’s a Karsite?”

“Oh, yes.” He looked startled. “That is not why you were looking at me, then. You are truly not from around here.”

“We are from – practically another world,” Peter answered carefully.

“Two other worlds, really,” Lu pointed out. “But that’s okay. We’ll be perfect for your mission that way.”

Soleck gave Lucy a long, thoughtful look, which he then turned on Peter, then Edmund, and then Susan. “You are strange, too, then. I see. It is possible that this mission will succeed.”

Susan didn’t think she was supposed to hear what he said next, but she had a habit of hearing such things left over from a time long-gone in a world long-locked. “It is possible,” he muttered, “that I am not the strangest thing here anymore.”

Seventh: http://aldersprig.dreamwidth.org/1111582.html

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“Finish It?” – Some Suggestions

I’m trying to put together an all_bingo “Finish It” card here.

It was pointed out to me that I have far, far too many unfinished stories to sort through.

So I started looking through the second page of my more, please tag: here

This is just a few suggestions of things someone has said “more, please” to that I have not finished. I will add to it as I find time.

Stranded
Stranded in Winter – Autumn is stuck in town in winter
Space Accountant
A Reason – and Accidental, and bunking arrangements, etc (Genique got Married?)
Addergoole
Matchmaker, Matchmaker – Sabine didn’t intend to collar Holles. But…
About That… Fridmar in an unexpected possibly-romantic situation with a student? i.e., Lyn is not great at consistence.
Bracken, her first year
Deaths in the Faerie apocalypse, a side note
They Were Over – Forrester runs into her former Keeper
Together/Again twins!

Aunt Family
Then and Now – Radar and his kitten
The Strength – and other stories of Deborah

Random?
Romance was never this convenient to handle – Mark Faine, Mark Faine, Mark Faine. How many of him are there?
Falling From Grace – …not sure what to say about this one.
this one didn’t get a more please but it could use one.

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A Test Post for Xposting (with bonus)


Want something written? Be the 1st to comment on each of the xposting sites with a topic/link and I’ll write you 100-250 words in the next week

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Feedback Requested

I have 3 posts currently open for feedback:

Patreon May Theme Poll – will close 5/5 at 5:55 (Eastern time)

“Finish It!” – what stories do you want to see me finish? I need a total of 30…

…and speaking of finishing, I was already planning on finishing a fdomme story, or at least progressing it. Tell me which one?

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AllBingo – “Finish It?”

okay, guys, there’s this – http://allbingo.dreamwidth.org/63531.html

So, much in the spirit of rix_scaedu‘s recent “More Character please” prompt request and “More Story please posts, I’m offering this:

Tell me what you want me to finish/work on

Give me 30 things (6 are for me to pick) – with URL if available – that need to be/you want to be completed/continued/furthered, and I will add them to my bingo card, to be worked on over the next 2 months.

If I get more than 30 (I accept this is entirely possible), I will put them all on a list and randomize out the first 30, or pick and choose ones I like, as I see fit. edit OR make a bigger card…

Edit again: See this post for an ongoing list of suggestions


The List

Daxton and Esha (3? votes!)
Arisse and Chress
Kidnappers in “Dragons Next Door.” (3? votes!)

Bjorn: http://aldersprig.dreamwidth.org/566245.html
Clarisse: http://aldersprig.dreamwidth.org/565158.html
Willard: http://aldersprig.dreamwidth.org/543285.html
Shahin and Emrys
Tilden: http://aldersprig.dreamwidth.org/525842.html
Mikary: http://aldersprig.dreamwidth.org/507478.html
Abrelle: http://aldersprig.dreamwidth.org/480486.html
Packing: http://aldersprig.dreamwidth.org/461258.html
Cúmhaí : http://aldersprig.dreamwidth.org/453665.html
Space Accountant: A Reason – and Accidental, and bunking arrangements, etc (Genique got Married?) – http://aldersprig.dreamwidth.org/1092113.html

[[Links for the below list here – http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/1197753.html?thread=5487545#t5487545 ]]
Aunts:
The Cat’s Paw.
B is for Beryl and her Boys.
Boy Trouble, which is rather skew from the previous.
Charming. (Okay, several of these are in related threads …)
The Powers that Be. (Missing from landing page.)
Midnight, Summer Solstice.
How The Family Does things — at resting point/chapter break, but there could be more.
Family and Cocoa and/or Warm Visions and Warm Family (missing from landing page).
Heroes (and earlier branches).
An Argument of Magic.
In the Attic. (Possible relation to previous?)
Aetheric Cleansing.
Trash and Treasures.
Bless the Cat.
Legacy Cat.
You’d Better Watch Out.
Wild Card.
Rumors about the Family.
The Strength.
I Am No Aunt.
Fated.
King(maker) Cake.
The Hazards of Magic.
Exhaustion.
Three Glass Beads, Peacock Blue.
A Locked Chest is Locked for a Reason.

Space Accountant:
Shenanigans. (There are multiple snippets without immediate followups, but it’s mostly all one thread.)

Reiassan (all out of order):
Fifty Years.
Rin and Girey, and more Rin, with research.
Rin’s parents, and Rin’s father, and …
Discovery.
And Edally and stuff, but I’m pretty sure you’re on that already.

Things Unspoken:
Linguistic Tricks.
Æ is for Ash.
Rodegard — and Esedora.

Links for this list here – http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/1197753.html?thread=5492153#t5492153
Other Reiassan:
Carrying the Spirit.
Skill and Dreams.
The Enemy’s City.
Road Map To….

Links for this list here – http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/1197753.html?thread=5489593#t5489593
One more From Aunt Family that’s more a vague suggestion than anything actually unfinished: Robbie meets Radar, discussed in comments.

The Portal Closed.

Unicorn/Factory – Cleaning House/Observing

Links for this list here – http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/1197753.html?thread=5491641#t5491641
More Unicorn/Factory:
Take Me (which I realize was thwarting then, and I don’t know if it’d be less so now).
Change.
Far Weston.
Where Do Unicorns Come From?.
The Silver Road.
The Unicorn Bride Rebellion.
Duty.
Unicorn Strokes.
Unicorn-Chaste.

And links for this list here – http://aldersprig.livejournal.com/1197753.html?thread=5491385#t5491385

Dragons Next Door threads:
Juniper kidnapped, though I’d also like to see a resolution with teams A, B, and C as well — especially if one of them decides to go gremlin hunting instead.
Over the Wall left off in the middle of the discussion, just as it was taking (yet another) interesting turn.

Jin and the hostage situation: how did he nab the guy long-distance, and what fallout came from it to Jin or anyone else?
We met Bianna, but we haven’t seen her since Jin talked to his friends about bringing her up with Jimmy.

[Doug
Fridmar
Autumn] – no specific story chosen yet

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FDomme stories – one of these to be continued for a bit.

Okay, I have a lot of “male captive” stories (for a reason), all of ’em hanging around unfinished.

(please feel free to suggest others, this is just off the top of my head):

Reynard and Elle
Mieve and Amrit*
Daxton and Esha ***
Arisse and Chress **
Jahnan And Yira…

Which one should I focus on for the next, say 5000-10000 words of entertaining not-currently-for-profit fic?

(These may turn into books of the self-pub variety at some point…)

(*s mark “votes”, since I didn’t feel like making this a poll and I won’t treat it as binding, more like recommendations)

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Kuro-Neko?

 Hey, has anyone heard from [personal profile] kuro_neko00 ?  I realized I hadn’t heard from them for a while….

If they’ve just stopped reading my work, that’s fine, but I worry when people vanish.

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Lilfluff has a prompt call open!

Go check out [personal profile] lilfluff ‘s prompt call to the theme "alternatives."

He’s taking prompts to his last two bingo cards, as well as more general prompts and "more of xxx"

Go prompt!  

Edit: Fluff has a landing page of sorts here which serves as a good starting place for his work.

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